Well done Rhythm, you did a great job on Hannah's story and describing her characteristics my favourite characteristic was a very bloody humongous wolf bite (that must of hurt). Next time maybe you could try instead of writing notes you could write a description.
Great work Rhythm I liked how you explained it all, when I was reading it it felt like I was really there and there is amazing vocabulary. Great job what was your favorite part of you character?
Well done Rhythm, you did a great job on Hannah's story and describing her characteristics my favourite characteristic was a very bloody humongous wolf bite (that must of hurt). Next time maybe you could try instead of writing notes you could write a description.
ReplyDeleteI loved your monster writing, Rhythm. It was very entertaining. I like your monster's characteristics.
ReplyDeleteWow Rhythm-lee that is awesome writing I like the begging of her story how she and her family were burned it is very interesting I love it
ReplyDeleteGreat work Rhythm I liked how you explained it all, when I was reading it it felt like I was really there and there is amazing vocabulary. Great job what was your favorite part of you character?
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